Sunday, September 30, 2007

Story points




Let me know if I'm missing something vital. Also lets consider any possible foreshadowing we can have at the beginning that may hint at the ox's fate.

3 comments:

Stacey Chomiak said...

I like it. Sounds great to me. Now the ox has a real character arc and it's a lot more developed.

Thanks Brock!

Coelasquid said...

I was thinking just having the ox worried about going to earth and the Emperor telling him not to worry because it's such as easy job there's no way he'll screw it up should be foreshadowing enough...

andy Zeng said...

good job, brock!