I like it. Sounds great to me. Now the ox has a real character arc and it's a lot more developed.Thanks Brock!
I was thinking just having the ox worried about going to earth and the Emperor telling him not to worry because it's such as easy job there's no way he'll screw it up should be foreshadowing enough...
good job, brock!
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I like it. Sounds great to me. Now the ox has a real character arc and it's a lot more developed.
Thanks Brock!
I was thinking just having the ox worried about going to earth and the Emperor telling him not to worry because it's such as easy job there's no way he'll screw it up should be foreshadowing enough...
good job, brock!
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