Liking it, I have a couple suggestions, if you like...I think the pan up into the sky happens a quick fast, I couldn't really read what was happening, I'de say make it bit longer, and maybe when it says ONE meal, him holding up the one finger should be delayed a bit, it feels like it cuts a bit fast and like its not on that beat. Just a thought, nice work though
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Hey Stace,
Liking it, I have a couple suggestions, if you like...I think the pan up into the sky happens a quick fast, I couldn't really read what was happening, I'de say make it bit longer, and maybe when it says ONE meal, him holding up the one finger should be delayed a bit, it feels like it cuts a bit fast and like its not on that beat. Just a thought, nice work though
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