tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8948452612522383904.post3736221552539551855..comments2023-10-26T02:17:40.797-07:00Comments on !MO CAP PENGUINS!: Story idears to considerJason Gerardus Teeuwissenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06971436271363119942noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8948452612522383904.post-24703127150239419132007-09-25T01:12:00.000-07:002007-09-25T01:12:00.000-07:00I wouldnt consider it enslavement, perhaps its mor...I wouldnt consider it enslavement, perhaps its more like he's now an equal to the humans, and he's gotta pitch in now for food as well.brockoramahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08922458949038373958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8948452612522383904.post-29738918940724172582007-09-24T22:32:00.000-07:002007-09-24T22:32:00.000-07:00i changed a few things in a more recent post, i re...i changed a few things in a more recent post, i remembered also that we mentioned another type of character arch. we start off with a more selfish/proud character .... check it outLeMarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06909334704111920002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8948452612522383904.post-15505044177853215862007-09-24T22:23:00.000-07:002007-09-24T22:23:00.000-07:00spider ox!i think it's a really good change. give ...spider ox!<BR/>i think it's a really good change. give the ox a motivation. i think we better show the ox is selfish at the beginning. when the heavenly emperor gives him the task, he doesn't want to do because he doesn't care about the human and think the task is wasted his time. then he changes his mind when he sees the people even he knows he will be punished. isn't it called character arc? <BR/>and i am thinking about gives more characters to the human. why do the human still enslave the ox after the ox gave them a huge help? they suppose to appreciate the ox.ANDY ZENGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16127546320183606810noreply@blogger.com