tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8948452612522383904.post3725315108249639810..comments2023-10-26T02:17:40.797-07:00Comments on !MO CAP PENGUINS!: New story dealie.Jason Gerardus Teeuwissenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06971436271363119942noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8948452612522383904.post-61810251481133105782007-10-01T11:01:00.000-07:002007-10-01T11:01:00.000-07:00I agree with Kelly, in that loyal-power hungry-sym...I agree with Kelly, in that loyal-power hungry-sympathetic is a bit much for such a short film.<BR/><BR/>The only thing I'm not sure about in this treatment is how little time he actually spends delivering the message. I can see why we'd have the Ox use his powers and make a river, since that gives the tail a reason to be jittery about what the emperor is going to think, but I worry that it'll take up too much time, and give us a much longer film to make.Angelinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09634005186891095365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8948452612522383904.post-44764279541577839132007-09-30T22:54:00.000-07:002007-09-30T22:54:00.000-07:00I think it's very important that the Emperor tells...I think it's very important that the Emperor tells the Ox to give the people food once every three days because that's the message that the ox is messing up and gets punished for delivering wrong.<BR/><BR/>I tried to write it so he find out about the power subconsciously, it just must not have come across right so we'll probably have to rework it. I figured the Emperor would say that he was lending the ox his powers, but the ox wouldn't understand exactly what extent that went to until he accidentally makes the river beside the town. <BR/><BR/>Though I think having the ox go from loyal to power hungry to sympathetic all in the space of two minutes may just be pushing it too much, to be honest...Coelasquidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04898313239946486021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8948452612522383904.post-65858330912332495542007-09-30T22:21:00.000-07:002007-09-30T22:21:00.000-07:00It's great! Kelly, good job! i just want to throw ...It's great! Kelly, good job! i just want to throw 2 small ideas:<BR/>1: If we make the emperor explains to the ox the humans can have food once every 3 days may change the emperor's character. i think the emperor doesn't care about the human is happy or not, he only cares about the worship level. He has the characteristic of boss: care about the result but not the process. Therefore, he should send the ox to the earth right away. and the ox accepts the task happily cause he wants his place in heaven.<BR/>2. i think if the ox doesn't know he has the superpower when he lands to the earth and finds out unconsciously might work better. Now it seems the ox sympathizes the human right after he meets them, and uses his superpower to help them immediately. it helps to describe the ox's character but reduce the surprise. my idea is, the ox finds out his superpower first, then sympathizes the human, changed his motivation, and finally uses his power to help the humans.<BR/>what do u guys think?ANDY ZENGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16127546320183606810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8948452612522383904.post-42160410114717818542007-09-30T20:48:00.000-07:002007-09-30T20:48:00.000-07:00Hmm, I really do like this treatment, Kelly! Great...Hmm, I really do like this treatment, Kelly! Great work.<BR/><BR/>I would like to make sure though that we all establish what sort of relationship the ox has with the tail, and how they contrast. I think the tail is a really vital part of the whole ox character.Stacey Chomiakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13607308687693038418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8948452612522383904.post-53298304699846194082007-09-30T20:34:00.000-07:002007-09-30T20:34:00.000-07:00nice! i think the ox has alot more character in th...nice! i think the ox has alot more character in this version.Jason Gerardus Teeuwissenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06971436271363119942noreply@blogger.com